Part 2: Assignment 2 – Form and Function

The Brief

First Thoughts

My first thoughts about this assignment was that it is a big assignment and a lot to design for! I was also nervous about figuring out what papers to choose for the publications; there is so much choice and trying to work out the different weights and figuring out which papers do the best job for each part of the book seemed like a foreign language to me even though I did the previous exercise studying the different paper samples etc.. I just figured that I would go off using my GF Smith paper samples; after all I can physically see and feel all of them to know what would be best!

Research

I started to research first, obviously I knew who Robinson Crusoe was and I knew vaguely what the story is about but I didn’t know enough to be able to design two books. About a week before I started this exercise my Mum had some old books that belonged to my Grandma and Grandad when they were children which she no longer wanted and didn’t have room for. For the purpose of this course and because I didn’t really want to lose them, (there’s that sentimental feeling that books give you! – trying to keep hold of them as they are heirlooms and hold their own story and history within their own right!) I took them off my Mums hands. One of the books was a thick, red, cloth bound omnibus of adventure stories of which included Robinson Crusoe which was a bonus! From first glance at the brief it states I needed to mock up my covers; I usually do this in a digital form by finding a book mockup online and placing my designs onto it. I thought this time though it would be a good idea to mock up my design onto this actual book! – it would then hold even more stories and history; firstly that it was gifted to my Grandma for being a good student at school and secondly it would have a new cover designed and made by her granddaughter 70 years later – my grandchildren might hold onto this copy and try and figure out why I designed a new cover for it so many years later! You never know, they might be artistic and add their mark onto it too!

Also, a hardback collectors edition does not need to be lightweight – they are made to purely keep at home on a bookshelf with no need to carry around so this was a perfect book to model it from.

I now had a copy of Robinson Crusoe in my hands; I didn’t have the time though to sit and read it all. I decided to cheat a little bit and find a pdf version online which I skimmed through; I also read a few summaries of the book. Reading these were interesting! There were so many takes on the story- bad and good! Some people were saying it is a marvelous tale of bravery and adventure whilst some other reviews were that it is a seriously outdated story of slavery and racism (They also used the image to accompany their review of Desmond out of Lost which confused me because I couldn’t see the link between the two!! *shoulder shrug) I could see both sides of the argument but also understand that is it an incredibly old story and times progress and evolve!

The key points that I picked out from the story were:

  • Friday – the slave boy that Crusoe rescues from the island and brings back home.
  • The cross that Crusoe builds on his arrival to the island – to use as a religious artefact but also to use as a calendar to tally and scratch the days off onto.
  • The Parrot, Goat and Dog that he owned on the island
  • The Cannibals and mutineers that he had to avoid
  • The footstep in the sand that he found which petrified him and reminded him that he was not alone on the island.

Having had a quick glance at covers they all seemed to be based around the same ideas; the island, sun, sea, sand, parrots, illustrations of Crusoe in raggy clothing on the beach… I did not want to create another cliched cover. I wanted to try and venture outside of the box and design something that wasn’t completely obvious.

I went onto Pinterest to start off with and researched more into the different covers and even just shipwrecks, sea and being a castaway in general just to come up with some ideas, colours and moods.

As I was on a tight timeframe I didn’t want to waste any time I had in trying to research into covers as I knew that this assignment wouldn’t be a quick process! – therefore even sitting in bed at nights I was looking at Amazon, Ebay and Instagram to see their copies of Robinson Crusoe!

I liked the cover above with the anchor and the simple RC. This gave me sailing vibes and the anchor definitely relates back to the sea. The ornate border around the outside gives it a classic feel but also relates back to the era of the book.

I even found myself looking at the book section in Tesco every time we went for a shop just to see what cover designs there were for similar books or any book actually! I wanted to see what different covers existed that I could steal some inspiration from! I found a few:

These intrigued me because I was under the impression that for paperback books you didn’t generally have coloured tipped pages.

The book below was interesting becasue the inside box was cut out to reveal the page underneath. The cover also ran short on the right hand side – it gives the impression of the sun moving across the sky at certain times of the day. The cover is very simplistic as well. It is bold and catches your attention.

I also found the Goddess Guides on my sisters bookshelf; I totally forgot these existed given the fact that the white copy used to be mine and I bought her the pink copy as a birthday present! These are beautiful covers! The covers have a fuzzy felt feeling! – really soft and luxurious to touch. They also feature a repeat pattern which is where my ideas were leading…

I also went into our LRC at work and had a look at a few copies in there to see what designs already existed:

These were very basic, uninspiring copies. They also seemed very dated and not very contemporary in feeling.

One cover that I found that really intrigued me was the cover for Robinson Crusoe that Coralie Bickford-Smith designed. It was quite coincidental as well considering she was one of the designers from the previous exercise that we had to research into and also considering that before I started this unit I had no idea who she even was.

This wasn’t an obvious cover design for the story – not any of this design represents being shipwrecked, sea, sand, island.. parrots! – it shows stages of the moons using hatched lines. Why the stages of the moon? it shows time – time spent and lost on the island. It is a very clever approach and really makes the cover more intriguing. It would definitely makes me pick up a copy and question and try and work out how the cover relates back to the story and what the story could be about. This is the sort of design outcome I wanted to achieve. I also liked the simplicity of it. There is beauty in simplicity – good design doesn’t need to be complicated.

Coralie Bickford Smiths cloth bound covers also interested me in the previous exercise and I wrote about how I would use the influence and inspiration from these to use in my own.

Image from Penguin Books

The other books I wrote about in the previous exercise that influenced me were the seasons editions designed by Kate Armstrong:

Initial ideas for Hardback collectors edition of Robinson Crusoe

I decided that for the hardcover version of Robinson Crusoe I would like to create something similar.

I wanted to take inspiration from both the above designers but for my design to not be too similar. I decided that the original book I was going to use of my Grandmas to mock the design onto was already cloth so I could have a paper cover and try and laser cut a design so that the cloth book showed from underneath the design. This would give a classic, contemporary look. I also have a laser cutter at work so felt that this wouldn’t be too much to achieve! I just had to figure out the design and then try and create a path around it in which it would be cut.

Knowing what to do for the design that wasn’t cliché and like everything else I had seen was challenging at first. I knew I wanted simple and an old exercise from many years ago when I was at college reminded me of how to go about it – take a complicated image and strip it down to its bare essentials. A bit like this assignment about form and function – take something down to its simplest.

The cross kept coming back into my mind because it had 2 significant meanings – 1) for the calendar it was used for and 2) for its religious impact on Robinson Crusoe and how it helped keep his faith throughout his time of being stranded. The religious aspect would have also been more meaningful in the 1700s when the book was written – it shows the history of the story.

I didn’t want to just show a cross on the design though because this would indicate it is a religious book to the unsuspecting reader. From researching Bickford- Smiths covers and Kate Armstrong’s I wanted to mirror something similar in the way they used a repeat pattern to cover the cover. I started sketching ideas around the cross and other elements of the story to see what I could come up with. In the back of my head remembering to strip everything down to its simplest form.

I was trying to from a cross as part of an anchor (remembering the cover above I talked about that gave me inspiration with the anchor and the RC) Could I form the rest of the story in with this simple illustration? Could I add some waves and the island and it become a symbol yet an image that is easily understood what it is?…

I took a photograph of one of the sketches and imported it in to trace around in Illustrator and create some artboards of different ideas to compare and develop.

I started by measuring my Grandmas book; width, length, width of spine… to give me the dimensions for my document. Once I had the correct size document I then traced around my sketch.

The simple outline I ended up with was this:

Here it is explained!

I played around with putting an anchor at the bottom of the design but I felt it trapped and constrained the design – it felt like it had more space to breathe and more negative space being empty at the bottom.

I felt it had potential… I messed around with it as a single image on a cover and by accident ended up unknowingly at that point with the design for the paperback edition! However… for this version I did change my mind and make the design into a anchor at the bottom, I felt it just explained the image more.

At this point though I had to figure out a way to repeat the design to make a repeat pattern and then work out a way in which I could laser cut it out to make the final cover!

I played around with the design below and felt it was moving in the right direction but it wasn’t quite there!..

I played around a lot more until I came up with this:

This looked classy and contemporary. I liked it. All the design is was the simple line drawing repeated and rotated at different angles to form a repeat pattern. Now I had the basis for my design I needed to create a path around the design so that I could laser cut it out eventually…

I did need to decide what colours to use for my design though. The original book of my Grandmas is Red so I needed colours that would compliment this. The colours I was thinking were contrasting, cool colours like blues or greens – these also tied in with island and sea theme.

I like the top middle design below because the green and the pink outlines really worked together but then I realised that Pink and Red would not be a good combination! The middle bottom version worked perfectly – I know the old wives tale of “Blue and Green should never be seen” but I made an exception in this case because they worked a treat together!- plus this saying comes from mariners and sea goers from the fact you should never paint your boat blue and green because it is bad luck and would not be seen out at sea.. I guess this ties in well with the fact that Crusoe was shipwrecked!!

Using the influence from the book cover I researched with the anchor and the simple RC, I decided to use this influence on my own cover and that is where I have left the space free at the bottom. I wanted R.C to be embossed onto the actual book. I had no idea how I was going to do this yet especially as the book is one that belonged to my Grandma. All I did know was that I would have to use the back of the book as the front was emblazoned with “The Favourite Omnibus”.

The next step was to create the book cover layout in InDesign.

I measured the Red book again to make sure that I had the exact measurements I needed.

I measured the front of the book and then created an InDesign document to that exact size. I then turned off the option in InDesign to allow pages to shuffle which meant that I could place pages next to each other on a layout. I then moved 5 pages alongside each other before changing the size of 3 of them to allow for the spine and the 2 inside cover flaps.

I used Baskerville typeface for this whole piece; it is such an elegant, classic typeface and it ties in with the era of the book itself. The modern repeated design and the modern, bright colours mixed in with Baskerville typeface really gives the whole design and book cover a classic contemporary look. I might be biased but I think it looks beautiful! 😉 I included the use of laser cut elements on the inside flaps too.. I planned to design inside cover pages and this would allow that pop of colour to show through!

I used the use of the grid to align my text up across the whole layout and to make sure that the hierarchy and design was balanced all the way throughout. On the inside front cover I wrote a short blurb on Robinson Crusoe and what the story was about, on the inside back flap I wrote about Daniel Defoe – this allows for the reader to know the history and historical references behind the author and the story.

I tried to use contrast throughout the design with different size text (large next to small) and by highlighting certain areas of text using the Royal Blue colour. I wanted repetition throughout the whole design.

I also used the Viking Press logo as this was the publisher that the brief stated I needed to use.

Even creating the layout of the whole complete book cover was challenging because the biggest printer I have at work is A3 to print out on. My book layout slightly overlapped A3. I had to create the layout as a whole but then also create 2 more documents to split the layout into 2 halves and then when I printed them out join the 2 together seamlessly at the spine with some photo mount! It worked easier than I expected to be honest!

From doing my research I always knew I liked cloth bound books but in this case I had the cloth bound book in the form of my Grandmas book, I then knew that my laser cut design and the book layout as a whole needed to be printed onto some kind of strong paper or card. Card wouldn’t allow me to have a luxurious feeling and normal 80gsm paper would be too thin for the job and easily rip as well as not giving that professional, luxurious feel.

What I managed to source was this:

It is a thin, glossy card. It is very smooth to touch and gives a lovely shine and shimmer. I printed my book cover layout onto it using a laser printer so the quality was very high! It is also thick enough to be able to be cut into but not weak enough to rip. It is the right weight to be folded neatly around the actual book too.

In regards to designing the rest of the pages for the book I was restricted. I didn’t want to ruin the pages of my Grandmas original book that I was mocking my cover onto. The book itself has hard board plain insides that had started to yellow and I felt that I could design some inside cover pages and cover these using the same card from above into the existing book.

This was the design that I went with:

It ties in with the design on the front. It uses the same colours as the front and the use of the block Blue colour really adds a pop of rich colour against the Green front cover when you turn the page over. Again, it gives a classic contemporary feeling. The repeated pattern seems quite luxurious and regal in appearance but the bright colours really modernise it and make it stand out.

Although I can’t include any pages in this book because the book is whole as it is and I didn’t want to ruin any original pages from the book, I did create some pages just for an example that could be used within this book if it were to printed into a new cloth bound book just like my Grandmas.

If I was to professionally publish my own version of this book I would have a Red, clothbound hardback book like my Grandmas and include my laser cut designed cover on its 160gsm glossy card and then have a plastic cover over the top to protect the book and the cover from the elements. It is a hardback collectors edition so it needs to be kept clean, protected and dust free. It also makes it feel and look more luxurious and expensive compared to its paperback friends! The inside pages would be from the GF Smith book of paper samples – I have chosen 115gsm Glacier White paper for the pages of the book because it is thin enough to be able to turn the pages easily but it is also a luxurious, smooth finish (as I attempt to show in my video!) I wanted to use a more luxurious feeling paper for my hardback collectors edition to what I would use in my paperback edition.


Attempting to laser cut…

The majority of my time spent on this assignment was trying to problem solve ways around trying to cut it out on the laser cutter! (*spoiler alert* I still ended up doing it by hand with a scalpel!)

The problem is that although I love the little, old antiquated laser cutter at work it is not compatible with Adobe or modern programs! To get my design from Illustrator over to the laser cutter I had to use the laser cutters software which is 2D Design.. (that is another b*tch!!) and manually draw around my design again so that it is readable for the laser cutter. That was great! – 2 solid work days later (whilst the rest of the school were on activity days!) I had perfected the stencil in 2D Design… I had also completed the whole book cover layout in InDesign which I was really pleased with. The plan was to print out the layout from InDesign of the whole book cover – including the original front cover and then place this onto the laser bed in the laser cutter… using the 2D Design document with the second stencil of the design I drew, use the laser cutter to go over my original drawing on the printed copy on the laser bed.. sounds complicated right?.. It actually really was… trying then to communicate to the laser cutter the exact, precise location to cut.. nope… 2 days completely wasted on this!

Below shows me drawing out my original design in 2D Design to create the stencil!

I took my printed copy of the layout I produced in InDesign and cut it out using a scalpel knife – it didn’t give the same professional appearance but it was the best I could offer at this point! For another solid work day I spent cutting out the front and back covers of the book!

The mockup

Once I had finished cutting out my cover I then went about mocking it up onto the original book. I was overall pleased with how it turned out. If I was to redo it I would possibly make the border area of the front and back covers wider because I found that I lost some of the border when it was placed onto the book (have a look at my video!).

I did mess up though (as I also explained in my video) because I was trying to find a way to emboss the R.C onto the cover; I had a letraset sheet in 84pt Helvetica and I knew before I even transferred it that this would be the wrong choice! – Helvetica is a very emotionless, strong, bold sans-serif typeface and the cover I have made is very soft and feminine in its appearance especially with using Baskerville (a very delicate and classic serif typeface) throughout the design. I instantly regretted my impulse decision. I then realised that I couldn’t scratch the letters off the cover so I knew I would have to take photographs of the final product and then Photoshop the letters out and Photoshop some Baskerville on to it!

I also added my own inscription into the book cover so that my future generations of relatives can see that the book has been handed down and things have been added to it. This book has its own story now!

I took these photographs and imported them through iCloud and then went about the process of tweaking them in Photoshop so that they were fit to upload to my social media design account @PinkAngeleno and so that they could be used as the final mockups for my design!

The Mockups

The paperback pocket sized, travel friendly edition

Designing for the paperback edition was a lot easier – it turned out that I created the cover for my paperback edition completely out of experimentation and it turned out that it just worked!

The Hardback edition and the paperback edition are very different publications in the fact that the hardback edition is a heavyweight, luxurious collectible work of literature and art whereas the paperback is purely a travel sized book that would get stuffed into a backpack or a pocket, the spine would get creased, the pages would get creased and it would be a much cheaper publication to produce in general.

Although they are both very different in publication, I needed the design to be very similar though; I needed them both to be seen as though they were part of the same series. If you was to put them alongside each other I needed them to be seen as though they related to each other in some way. I needed repetition in design. I decided to use the same colours, the same motif and the same typeface.

This was the accidental experimental design that I was messing around with for the hardback edition but then I ended up using for my paperback edition:

It uses the same motif or line drawing that is used in my hardback edition – which I repeated to make the pattern on my front and back covers. I used the same 3 main colours and placed them into 3 blocks. This is a very simple, bold and an attention seeking cover.

The Red also ties in with the hot sun, the Green ties in with the island and the Blue ties in with the sea – they are all in order according to the design too.

I have a tiny travel guide book to LA which I modelled this cover from. I measured up the LA guidebook and it was 110mm x160mm and as I did before with my hardback edition I created an InDesign document and then added 5 pages to create the front, back, spine and 2 inside flaps. I chose to do the book this size as it is a book to be taken places and to travel with, it is a book to take with you on your own adventures!

I then created a very similar layout to that of my hardback edition. I didn’t need to split the design over 2 sheets this time as the size of the book cover fitted on an A3 sheet and was easily printed onto 1 sheet. Again, I used the same 160gsm glossy, card paper stock that I used for my hardback cover – just because it prints a dream and because it gives a nice glossy appearance and is strong to keep a book protected.

I also created the pages that I would mock up inside the paperback edition; again, very similar to those that I designed for the hardback edition but different in the fact that I used less colours and they are not as ornate. The inside front cover uses the same design as the hardback edition but isn’t in the striking Blue – it uses Blue as the main colour but on a white plain background. These pages in this paperback are to be printed on basic 80gsm printer paper and for it to be a basic, cheap and lightweight as possible. I have done a little video below to show my choice of paper:

As my video above shows, I then decided to print the cover out and attempt to see how it would be put together properly in industry. I started reading “Making Books” by London Centre for Book Arts and also watched “The Art of the Book” tutorials on YouTube by Shepherds of London:

https://store.bookbinding.co.uk/store/department/123/THE-ART-OF-THE-BOOK/

This gave me an understanding of how I would need to print and collate the pages and back boards etc to bind and make into a book. With my printed version of Robinson Crusoe though, there wasn’t enough pages to make up a book and my spine was too thick for the limited pages I had. I did however paginate my pages correctly in InDesign so that when they printed out they were all in order, (It wasn’t such a long drawn out process since I already had experience in doing the pages for my zine!) I then could see how I would sew the pages and bind them together and then my front and back cover would be printed onto a hard board and the inside front cover adhered onto the inside with the pages of the book glued to the spine.

The Mockups

Washed Ashore by Rik Bennett: A survival guide

In the brief it stated that this book must “piggyback” off the success of the other 2 books Robinson Crusoe books I have designed. Therefore it didn’t need to be the same but it needed to relate back to the other 2 and be seen as part of the series.

The book would be a survival guide and all I could picture in my head were the same things that appeared when I did a Google search of survival guides… big stencil fonts and warning colours (yellow, black, red…), symbols and bold, attention seeking covers. I didn’t want cliche again, I didn’t want to recreate yet another stencil font symbol riddled cover!..

I wanted this title to be similar to the paperback edition I did for Robinson Crusoe. As with the hardback design and the paperback design using the same colours and typeface I wanted this one to use the same colours to keep the repetition but I knew that Baskerville on a Survival guide possibly wouldn’t be the way!- I needed a strong Sans-Serif font to do the job! I chose Neue Haas Unica – Some nice Swiss type on there! I did however still use Baskerville for the authors name.. I thought this would add contrast and repetition from the last 2 covers!

I started brainstorming ideas around what I could do for the survival guide… I even watched Castaway to try and get some ideas for what I could use on the cover! Chris kept telling me to use Wilson as the main design… *eyeroll! ;D

I looked at symbols but knew that I didn’t want to use what everybody else had done.. i.e. tents, fire… I even researched plane safety cards to see what illustrations and simple diagrams they used to symbolize warning and survival!

I then googled “How long could you survive on a desert island” and the piece of writing that I read in reply to that question gave me the idea for the rest of it!..

It seemed a bit gruesome really and morbid.. but the fact that the first things people think you will need when you crash onto a desert island are shelter, fire and food etc… no-one actually thinks that without fresh water you could have everything else you need but still die! I wanted to bring this shock tactic and fact onto the front cover of the book.. I’ve not seen another survival guide use this approach.. it gives a snippet of what the book could be about, presents the reader with a gruesome fact and then would leave you intrigued as to what else lies in the book or what else the book is about.

I decided to use the same block of colour approach as I used in the paperback Robinson Crusoe, they would then both look similar together.

The 3 blocks of Blue running down the design also represent the sea and the 3 days it takes until you die from lack of water. I wanted to use typography in this piece and using the numbers which follow down the blocks this is like a countdown.. 3, 2, 1…. are you dead from lack of water and knowledge or have you read the book and you have survived? It also uses the rule of 3. When you reach the bottom of the layout and the design you are greeted by a block of yellow which is the sand, washed ashore! The 3 blocks on the sand keep repetition within the layout and also represent sand grains and the rule of 3.

The numbers are also placed so that your eye has to follow them down and across to the end of the layout. Number 2 is bigger than the others to add contrast and number 1 is cleverly placed floating at the top of the last blue block.. this could symbolize that it has survived and swam to safety or died and is floating at the top! – that is down to the readers discretion as to whether they are going to allow themselves to be educated by the book on survival techniques!!

The cover is very bright and bold and grabs the attention of the reader by the text at the top and by what is happening with the numbers going down the page. It is a balanced composition and hierarchy.

Just like the last 2 book covers I have designed I designed this one in the same way. This book is slightly bigger than the travel, pocket sized paperback I designed for Robinson Crusoe; that was a bit bigger than A6 and this book cover is a normal paperback size of a bit bigger than A5 – 125mm X 195mm.

As with the last two layouts I have designed I did exactly the same for this one and created a document in InDesign and created 3 pages, 1 of which I altered to make the correct size for a spine. For this design I didn’t include inside front and back cover flaps.

I relied on the grid again to line up my text and so that I correctly positioned elements on the design.

I wanted my survival guide to have an element of humour to it… I don’t think that a survival guide on being a castaway on a desert island is a really serious topic considering it doesn’t happen all too often and is quite an impossible thing to occur! – I picture this book as a light hearted, entertaining, funny holiday read!

I really like the added reviews at the top of the book! – me and Chris came up with some creative, clever reviews!!

For this book I would want to go somewhere in-between the other 2 books.. Robinson Crusoe hardback edition was luxurious and used luxury paper, Robinson Crusoe the paperback edition was more basic as a travel, pocket sized book that would be folded and creased inside a backpack or pocket whereas this copy would be somewhere in-between – possibly a book you would take on holiday with you but not carry around in a bag.. maybe just a coffee table/bedside table read. It wouldn’t need to be super light weight because of the fact it is not being carried around. I envision a glossy mid-weight cover and glossy lightweight pages inside…

What I found from using my GF Smith paper sample book was the Max range which is suitable for magazines, books and advertising. The 100gsm weight glossy paper in Natural Matt would be ideal for the pages of the book as the paper is still lightweight but adds a bit more of a luxurious feel compared to the lightweight 80gsm pages of the paperback Robinson Crusoe. I then decided on the 250gsm natural matt glossy card for the cover as this is thick enough to support the rest of the book and be able to not be creased and bent easily.

The Mockups

What have I learned from doing this assignment?

I feel like I have learned a great deal that I didn’t have much knowledge about until I started this assignment or unit!

My GF Smith paper sample resource book has been a blessing! – this allows me to have every kind of paper sample literally at my fingertips with useful information to accompany it on what the best uses for the papers are! I would have struggled a great deal without it by having to rely on my my free samples sent out by individual printing companies which are ok.. but they are not as informative or organised into categories like the GF Smith paper samples.

I also went out and bought some books to read up on and research and “Making Books” was one of them that was helpful… I was hoping to have made one of my book cover designs into a proper book using the help of this book and “The Art of the Book” tutorials on YouTube which are particularly helpful in getting started with bookbinding… The only thing that hindered this was my deadline for this assignment. I spent a lot of time trying to perfect the laser cutting aspect and for the hardback edition that I lost a lot of time because of that. I shall definitely be trying out book binding though and attempting to make some of my own sketchbooks and notebooks to use as gifts etc!

I now know a lot more than I did about Robinson Crusoe!.. and it definitely pushed me out of my comfort zone because Robinson Crusoe is definitely not a cover I would have chosen to design for myself!

Overall, I am pleased with my design outcomes; other than regretting not making one of the covers into an actual bound book I feel like I have learned a lot more about how books are professionally printed and bound and how that as a designer my job just isn’t to design the cover but also to design and figure out what papers are used and how it will be printed etc…

Working on my Tutor Feedback

The symbolism captured in your line illustration for the deluxe version is great. Why did you use just one line weight; could you have experimented with different weights or drawing by hand or drawing in
the sand or painting with a fine brush or etching into wood etc? Developing your illustration
into a pattern is visually pleasing but how does the illustration style and laser-cut technique
reflect the narrative?

In my spare time I actually do a bit of Pyrography so it seemed appropriate that I could try this out! – I guess that in my head at the beginning of this brief I had looked at so many modern covers that I had the vision in my head to go with a similar idea! I like grungy and gritty mixed media designs so it would be a good idea to give a few experimental designs a go! Pyrography onto driftwood would work well with the narrative too because it could have been carved by hand out of sheer boredom by Crusoe as he was stranded for hours, days, weeks, years on the deserted island.

My in-laws have a plot of land with some old glasshouses on and let me tell you there is nothing you couldn’t find in there! – after searching for a short while I came across the perfect piece of flat wood which would work well enough to etch onto. I etched my fine line illustration onto it, (thicker lines just did not work with this illustration as the lines got lost and blended in together).

I then couldn’t think of a way to make a piece of wood look attractive on a book cover so I decided to take it for an outing out to the beach and see if I could take some scenic photographs of it!

It wasn’t the most sunny, scenic day in Old Hunstanton on this day, even though it was July!- It was a little cloudy and we very almost got cut off by the sea trying to photograph the old ship wreck! I was gutted the sea was coming in quite quickly and we couldn’t have had some photographs with the piece of wood right near it! – fits the narrative right?

I started off with these photographs and none of them thrilled me! – how I could turn these around into an interesting, engaging book cover I never knew!

I then decided to photograph from a different view point… taking a sharpie and drawing onto some rocks for effect to see how that might look!

I was just put massively off by the fact that my freehand illustration on the rock looked like a face! All I could see staring back at me was a smiling rock!

I then took a few more photos and whilst I got a few nice action shots of the sea kicking in – the rest weren’t much good!

I then decided to try and use the wood to create some different mixed media techniques:

I used a pencil originally to etch over the top of the wood but then decided to just try an embossing pen over the top which worked really nicely. I then decided to try and block print with it by using lino paint and a roller to roll the paint over the top and then press down onto the paper. I liked this technique because it looks like the illustration has been drawn into blood; Robinson Crusoe does have a darker side to its story with the Cannabilism and murders so this could tie in with the narrative!..

I decided to explore around this idea first! I imported the photograph into Photoshop and developed a few ideas! I also got some photographs of some sand textures and imported them in and overlaid them with my photograph to make it look as thought he blood has been dragged across the sand and then drawn into. I also created a diagonal striped line pattern in Photoshop as this represents danger and is also used in warning signs – I also like the minimalist/Constructivist look of it. I have experimented with Typography by breaking the text up and by changing

My favourites are these ones:

I then developed these a bit more:

I decided on these two in the end; one slightly more minimal than the other

I decided to also go back to the shipwreck at Hunstanton Beach that I was previously unsuccessful at reaching before high tide! – I wanted to see if I could get any good photographs of the ship wreck to include on one of the covers so that it would tie in more with the narrative. I went on a beautiful afternoon at low tide and I was lucky enough to get great photographs this time!

https://www.edp24.co.uk/lifestyle/real-story-behind-the-mystery-wreck-of-hunstanton-sands-935446

https://norfolktalesmyths.com/2019/02/17/hunstanton-the-s-t-sheraton-wreck/

The story behind S.T Sheraton is really very interesting! It is amazing that such a big, iron clad ship can erode so much in half a century.

Wreck of the Sheraton on Hunstanton Beach
The Sheraton wreck as it used to be at low tide. Photo taken July 1948 © Copyright William Grindrod 

I then took my favourite photos and edited them in Photoshop; there was a couple in the way of my epic sunset and front of the boat snap and I really wanted to edit them out!

I then started to mess around with ideas in Photoshop of different layouts which included the photograph of the front of the boat; I did have the idea to include the original illustration that I used in all my previous covers (the one I etched into the wood!) but instead I decided to use the paint effect that I created using the block of wood, change the colour and use it to represent the choppy, dangerous waters.

These covers give me Bauhaus vibes. It also reminds me of Constructivism:

Constuctivism was an early twentieth century art movement founded in 1915. Constructivist art was abstract and aimed to reflect modern, industrial society and urban space. The movement rejected decorative styles in favour of an industrial look. Constructivists used their art in favour of propaganda and social purposes and were associated with Soviet socialism and the Russian Avante-Garde.

Although Robinson Crusoe is in no means related to this art form, I liked the minimalist, bold look. The colours contrast each other well and represent the sea, sand and danger! Even the text at an angle represents a ship going down which does tie in nicely with the narrative of Crusoe. The overall look of the cover gives sea sick, dangerous choppy waters, rough sea vibes.

I then went back to look at the cover for the survival guide – “Washed Ashore” my tutor liked the potential in my original design but just did not see that it worked as a survival guide or to tie in with the two Crusoe novels. I can see her point of view from reading through her feedback; although she liked my humorous approach for my original cover for it, she said there was trouble distinguishing whether it is a novel or a guide.

I decided again to use the same layout that I have used in the other two designs as this would work on a survival guide; the warning colours, the diagonal warning stripes… I started to mess around in Photoshop with some layouts and some ideas:

I ended up liking 2 designs;

The one on the left is just pure experimental typography and I actually like the most but the one on the right is possibly more appropriate for the type of book it is supposed to be. I have been defeated by cliché by using the stencil font for “A survival guide”; it is not something I wanted to do but other than doing what most existing covers do by using symbols this seemed the less cliché of the two evils!!

Exercise 4: Designing a Cover

The Brief:

“A rat in a maze is free to go anywhere, as long as it stays inside the maze.”

Margaret Atwood, The Handmaid’s Tale, 1985

Following on from the discussion of George Orwell’s novel 1984, look at the covers for Margaret Atwood’s equally dystopian novel The Handmaid’s Tale (1985), in which a woman finds herself surviving inside a harsh American fundamentalist society that sees women’s roles as subservient cooks, matrons, and mothers. Alternatively, you can pick a different book to respond to but it needs to be one with more than one cover design so avoid recently published books.

Are there key conceptual motifs being used over and over again within different cover treatments?

Can you identify more expressive versions of the covers? Check the date of each version and try to speculate about the historical, political or social context for each one. (Don’t spend long on this but it’s important to realise that creative design doesn’t happen in a vacuum.)

Using one of the main motifs you have identified (such as the uniforms that feature in the book), the title of the book, author’s name, and no more than three colours (including black and white) generate as many different layouts of the cover design as you can. Think about how you can dynamically layer, organise, frame, clash, or balance these elements. Work quickly and come up with lots of different visual possibilities.

This is a similar exercise to the Lightbulb Project in Graphic Design 1, which aims to generate quick design possibilities by arranging your typography, motif and colours in as many, and as varied, ways as possible.

Use thumbnail drawings or DTP layouts to achieve at least ten fundamentally different layouts. This is a warm-up exercise that will help you with your approach to designing a cover for assignment two.

I really liked this exercise even though I had never heard of the book before I started this brief! As always I started off by doing some research into previous covers and reading a summary of the book to get a feel for what the storyline was about. I then found out that there is a series (4 seasons) that is streaming on Amazon Prime (which now I am HOOKED on!) so I also started watching that initially for some inspiration and to try and set the mood for my designs. It is a hard hitting, scary watch!- some scenes take your breath away and make your heart and stomach leap out of your mouth!

I started to research into existing covers on Pinterest which is always one of the best sources for visual references:

I also referenced anything I saw that gave me further ideas or that I thought I could use as inspiration in my designs.

There are lots of covers that have been designed for this book; most of them reference the Handmaid with her red dress and bonnet. This was the main motif that was used but I wanted to try and come up with more expressive designs that people had not yet explored.

One of the images that gave me inspiration was this one that I found on Pinterest:

This illustration is from a 2012 copy of The Handmaid’s Tale although it reminds me of something that has come out of a Sci-fi book from the 1960’s/70’s as it feels like it has a futuristic feel to it! The illustration shows a pregnant Handmaid who is looking down at her tummy. When I saw this illustration and looked at her belly, in my head I saw a round, Red circle and I knew this is what I needed to try and use in my designs. I knew I wanted to try and depict the red Handmaid but bring in the fertility element of the storyline.

After doing research on different books in the previous exercise, I had an idea of what I liked and didn’t like and knew that I wanted a very sharp, clean, minimalist cover. The brief also asked that we used limited colours so I knew that an intricate design was out of the question. From doing the previous exercise and researching Suzanne Dean and her award winning minimalistic cover of The Handmaid’s Tale I knew I wanted to take inspiration and draw ideas from this.

I started to sketch some initial ideas in my sketchbook. I was trying to make the designs as minimal as possible- stripping them right down to their bare essentials- the basic shapes and layout.

Some of the ideas I came up with were winners and helped me to go forward and develop the ideas but a lot of them just didn’t work! The third along at the top was supposed to symbolize a pregnant tummy but just ended up looking like a droopy boob!! The ones that worked the best are the most simple. I liked the black that I used as the outline silhouette of a woman’s body. I was playing around with the idea of negative space within a design at this point. I then had the idea to depict the unborn child (first in foetus stage) and then just using the bonnet to depict the unborn female in the womb. I also used small red circles on the earlier designs to depict nipples; I wanted to push boundaries and design outside of my comfort zone. The book is all about exploiting women and stripping women of their freedom and their rights and I know that in todays society “free the nipple” is quite a controversial movement! I wanted to advocate this in my design and do more or less the opposite what the book storyline doesn’t do! However, I did reframe in the end from using them in my final design 1) because when I removed them it allowed for negative space at the top of the design and didn’t distract the attention from what I actually want the readers to see and 2) because I felt it would be too much and sexualise the book; I didn’t want the cover to imply “sex” at all – I just wanted the cover to show the womanly, strong, female body and for it to represent the pregnancy storyline.

When I had more further ideas of what I was doing I then took the designs forward and developed them into more artboards- eliminating designs at each stage until I finally came up with a handful that I could choose and further develop and improve.

I also experimented with hand lettering because my original idea was to have floral branches and twigs coming out of the pregnant tummy and then evolving into the authors name at the top. I wanted the design to be very feminine and hand lettering just allows a more softer approach that by using typography.

I did change the design from that which I drew above though; instead of having the branches and twigs coming out of the thigh and pregnant belly I had the idea to include the ovaries and make the twigs and branches come out of them instead! I took a key motif (the bonnet) and changed the context of it slightly by making it form the 2 ovaries. I really like this idea because it is using one of the obvious key motifs but using it in such a way that is more expressive and different.

This is a screenshot of the hand lettering I drew from my design above using Illustrator.
This is a screenshot of my artboards in Illustrator.

I experimented with hand lettering but also with typography; I wanted to do some design ideas that used typefaces. I was torn between two; Bebas Neue and Didot. Bebas Neue is a Sans-Serif and is very condensed. I initially thought I wanted a sans-serif font that comes across non-expressive, Bold and abrupt but then I thought about the womanly cover and decided that a much softer, feminine typeface would be needed. Didot was the perfect choice! It is a serif font and appears soft and feminine but it is also a lovely, attractive typeface to be able to read (It is popular in glossy fashion magazines!). I then experimented with the leading of the text; I like the tight, condensed look of Bebas Neue but I did think that from a distance it would make it difficult to read if the leading was too tight. I opted for Didot and gave it a much more relaxed, spacious feel.

I then developed on the artboard ideas further and experimented with different variations of the typography etc.. I eventually realised that I liked the versions I had done using Didot and with the authors name above in small. I experimented also with colour; the brief specified we were to use no more than 3 colours and the ones I originally experimented with were Red, Yellow and Black. The yellow worked perfectly for the typography as a clash of colour against the rest of the design. It allowed the title to stand out on its own. The red represents the book and the Handmaid and I felt gave it a very communist feel (which actually wouldn’t be too far from the storyline in the book!) Having such simple use of colour really allowed my designs to be striking, clean and really stand out. The colours also contrast each other beautifully.

Just for further feedback and reassurance I printed the artboard pages out and asked my colleagues which ones stood out the best to them. They all agreed with the ones I had chosen as my favourites and these were the ones I took forward. I know that I did not have to produce a final design or cover for this assignment but I enjoyed the exercise so much and really liked my design outcome that I wanted to make it into a final piece for my portfolio and my Instagram account. When I was mocking the designs up, I decided that I liked both versions and wanted both to appear in my portfolio and on my Instagram for comparison so I included both. I do however prefer the version without hand lettering and this would be my choice of final design.

I mocked them up onto a square hardbook book – I had the idea in my head of making a square book as this would allow for more space on the cover:

I then mocked them both up onto a paperback edition:

However, because I had designed my design to fit a squared cover I did lose some of the negative space from my original design. I still like it though!

The final designs:

Responding to tutor feedback

My overall feedback for this exercise was really good! One of the things that my tutor mentioned in her feedback though which really let me down was that she thought I hadn’t done any first initial sketches before I took it through to digital – it was so frustrating because I did! (*massive crying face right now!) I just totally forgot to import the photo of my sketches onto my original post!!!

So, here they are! (better late than never!)

My tutor also commented on my questionable choice of a square book.. which actually now looking back from a few months ago when I completed this exercise I actually completely agree with her. It is unusual to find a squared book unless it is a children’s softback or hardback. I think at the time I massively struggled to find a free A5 decent paperback and hardback mockup online so ended up with the square version!- poor design choice!

Therefore I rethought my decision and mocked my book up nicely onto an A5 mockup:

My tutor then let me know in her opinion she preferred the version of my design where I used hand lettering as it made the book come across more feminine. I totally agree!- I think I just doubt my decisions sometimes and struggle to make final decisions! I could rectify this in the future by doing surveys or something similar where people vote on the final design.. either that or by asking people to critique my work more! The best place to do this would be my workplace as they all have DT experience!

Another question that was highlighted was why did I make the decision to choose yellow as the colour for the type? – simply, I just wanted a contrast from the Red! Yellow and Red both work great next to black but contrast against each other!

That’s a wrap! :D Book cover design exercise DONE!

Following on from my last post I have now finished the Book design exercise!! (well!… almost! I wrote this post a few days ago and have been keeping it in my drafts! – I have relooked over my designs and seen one potential flaw!… I have written about it at the bottom of this post!)

As I said in my previous post I was feeling very apprehensive about starting this exercise. I didn’t know anything about the author and did not know anything about any of the books he had written. Book design is something that I had never looked into or done before and I was completely overwhelmed with where to start with it. Finishing this exercise I feel that I have learned a lot from researching into the author and his books, watching TED talks by Chipp Kidd about successful book design and looking into existing designs out there. I feel I have achieved successful final design outcomes. I really enjoyed this exercise and as I said in my previous post book design is something that I would potentially like to go into.

From my last post I adjusted the typography on the books; although some parts of the text are still hard to read, I actually quite like this effect. I also designed the spines. Once I saved the designs as PDFs I then imported them into InDesign. I set up the document in InDesign and worked out how big to make the spine by calculating the number of pages by the weight size of the paper used in paperback books (usually 80gsm). The calculations came up to about 4mm but I decided to work larger than that so that I would have more spine to work with in the design. I then created PDFs and mockups for my final designs. The mockups that I did for my Instagram posts I mocked up on hardback books. There are lots of free downloads online for free book mockups but most of them are for hardback books. I specifically wanted one to feature all 3 books at the same time. The mockups below show this.

The images above are the PDFS of my final designs with the spines. The screenshots below are the makings of them in InDesign.

*** Since writing this post as a draft a few days ago, I watched a poster critique by @thechrisdo. I know that this is book design and not poster design but the same rules still apply. It was so obvious that I don’t know why I did not spot my mistake earlier!… I haven’t made the titles of the books bold. I need to make the titles bold and the authors name in regular. This will show contrast between the 2 and also make the title stand out more. I may even adjust the tracking of the titles also.

The final stages! – Making the HG Wells FINAL book covers!

I have FINALLY reached the final steps to this exercise! I have really enjoyed the design process though even though it has been a long and overdrawn one! – I always said I didn’t want to half ass it and I wanted to make sure that when it was complete that I had done the very best that I could have done with it! Putting the typography onto it and making them into book covers was a really daunting prospect! – However, I can go to bed tonight knowing that I am one step closer to making them look like the real deal! Doing this exercise has really made me also think that going into book design is something that I would want to do. I find now that whenever I go into bookshops I am scanning the shelves for the covers and not necessarily the books! Researching into Chipp Kidd and purchasing some of his books as well really interested me and made me think deeper into what really goes into the design of a good book cover!

“Never judge a book by its cover….. Unless you’re a designer!”

I started off with the 3 designs I tweaked on Photoshop (below):

I have a current obsession with textures… which is a good thing seeing as one of the suggestions in my last feedback was to add texture to my work! I watched a video by Roy Cranston on Chris Do’s @thefutur where he spoke about where and how he sourced his textures for his poster work, it was funny because I already collect random photos of interesting textures and findings but just never use them! He also mentioned how you have to scour the internet for the free ones. I thought it might be interesting to add a texture to the covers.. maybe like an old vintage paper feel? This is what I went out to try and do.

I found a texture online which resembled ripped, discoloured old vintage paper (below) I imported this into Photoshop and did an overlay of it with my designs.

The texture I found online to add an effect to my covers

I think the texture worked extremely well! (below) This is what the first cover that I designed looked like with the texture included:

I then had the problem of successfully adding text onto the cover without making it look too drab, boring and old fashioned. Although I wanted the covers to have a vintage feel I also wanted a modern feel to the design to bring the book into the 21st century and to make sure that it is still relevant for many more years.

This above is the design I toyed with; I liked the idea of Franklin Gothic as a font at first glance.. it was literally the first trial typeface I used and tried it with. In my head I knew I wanted the text to be quite prominent across the whole cover. I had the idea of turning the opacity down to make it partially see through. I thought as well I could match the colours of the type to the yellow in the hour glass (see below)

I liked this idea, the yellow worked well but it was still missing something… This is when I thought of the idea of using coloured bands across it (one for each line of the title)

I really liked this idea! The only thing I needed to work on was the typography! I spent a while (a fair time!) picking out some of the best fonts and using them on all the designs to print out and compare! I sent photos also to my Mum who using her expert opinion and eye ;p picked out Helvetica! I also shared captions on my Instagram and people replied also with Helvetica. The reasons?.. obviously with it being the font of choice for most designers and also for the fact it is strong and stands out on a cover.

These are the sheets I shared with all the different fonts! (below)

So! Helvetica was the popular opinion!… and you know what?!… There is a reason why Helvetica rules all!.. I actually really like the look of them! The type is still illegible in places but I can work on that!

I then wanted to give it a go adding the publishers name and logo. I decided to go for Penguin – The classics! I found a logo online (not the best way to do it for pixelization and plagarim… BUT the brief states to use one so!…)

This one is perfect!… I then added it to each of the designs and adjusted the layouts accordingly and this is what they look like so far! 😀 really, really chuffed with them so far!

I still have adjustments to make; the illegible type, the hyphen in Tono – Bungay, the bars so that they all line up, the spine to design, bring everything together to create the final cover and then make mockups on actual books but at the moment I am pleased!

The Time Machine: Design Development (cont)

I have been a bit slow on development the last week or so… I have also been trying to work on something I want to start in the new year. (I’ll do a separate post for that!)

I watch a lot of SkillShare tutorials to learn different effects and skills to further improve my design work digitally. My last post mentioned how I studied a Duotones class by teachers called Evgeniya & Dominic Righini-Brand, Graphic Design & Photography  well I also studied another one of their classes for creating a screen printed effect. I thought this might add an “older” more vintage feel to the piece.

After I had finished the tutorial I also uploaded the finished piece to the Skillshare page for others to see (which is unknown for me!!- stepping out my comfort zone!) Here is the link below to what the tutor had to say to my piece!

https://www.skillshare.com/projects/224662

Out of all the trials I have done so far though I have to say I like the first one pictured above! I also posted it to my Facebook for the opinion of everyone else and they all agreed that this one stands out the most and the contrast between the black and yellow works the best. I am now going to draw the other 2 designs and then bring them into Photoshop and do the same digitally as this one. I will change the colours on each though so that they each have their own colour scheme.

The Time Machine: Drawing Development (cont.)

I have back tracked slightly from my last post!….

Sat on my break at work and I was asked how my uni work is going, I reached for my phone and passed it around the table to show what I have been working on… The feedback was good! – everyone thought my drawing was good!… however, there was some slight confusion as to whether the flowers were coming out of an hourglass timer (sand timer) or a regular broken vase… Having another look after a few days apart from it I could see where this could be confused. Although I was pleased with my drawing I felt like it was still missing elements.. I decided to redraw it… AGAIN! but this time make sure it is obvious that the flowers are coming out of a sand timer and not a “vase”!

I changed the flowers slightly also.. I was unsure of doing this but I think it could work…

My flowers before looked quite wilted and withered and were a generic flower.. What I have drawn now are 2 white roses. I debated on using roses as the book states “2 white flowers” but when I looked up the symbolism behind white roses, to give someone white roses represents purity, inncocence, kindness and love. All of these traits are what Weena gave to the time traveller.

The sand timer (hour glass) has sand in the top half coming down to the bottom of the timer, before the sand hits the bottom of the timer it forms into a hand which holds the skull. The hand shows authority and dominance and represents the Morloch people. The skull represents the cannibalism aspect in the story; “killing the Eloi like cattle.”

This is what I sketched up last night:

It took me forever to get the hand right, I am hoping it will look even better once it is inked.

I was not happy with the broken glass on my last drawing. I accidentally at home smashed a circular wine glass, I decided to keep it and use it to draw from for the broken glass aspect of my drawing.

So far I feel like this design works better than the previous one, I shall get it inked out and then see some more!

The Time Machine: Digital Development

Yesterday I decided to have a go importing my hand drawn ink design into Photoshop and have a play around!

I am not a pro at Photoshop to say the least, so the tutorial I watched on Skillshare a while back that I wrote in my blog about really helped me!..

I decided to change the colours, I want each of the 3 books I design to use 3 different colours and work as a series in that the designs are the same and also the colours tie them together. The flowers in the Time Machine are white but dead, brown and withered at the ends so I decided to alter the colours to match this… I went with a white/murky yellow/black colour scheme.

To get me familiar with changing the colours and doing certain things in Photoshop I had a play around first, this was the trial starter piece..

Using the pen tool to draw around areas and making them a selection so that I could add colour to the area and then multiply to blend it in with my line drawing. I then created a clipping mask on a duplicate layer to further blend more colour in.

When I felt more confident I then started on a proper version;

This one I kept the colours quite subtle… I coloured in all of the flower shapes with a murky yellowish colour and carried this on into the hourglass. I liked it but it didn’t shout out at me..

With this version I messed around more with the colours and blending them to create 2 tone effects. I accidentally moved the flowers layer but actually quite liked it being out of the shape slightly.. It gave a mix of the 2 colours; white and yellow. I also created like a water colour/watermark effect at the top of the petals.

In this version I made the colours more deep and murky. I feel the colours are the strongest in this version. Overall I am happy with the progress I have made with it and the new skills I have learned, however It still needs improvement… I now need to find ways of how to make it work on a book cover with the typography element etc.. I think though that I shall draw the other 2 book designs and then take all 3 of them together and then look into layout and typography etc..

I also looked at mockups for displaying work more professionally on my Instagram account. I downloaded a simple poster mockup document and then added a drop shadow around the edge of my image.

The Time Machine: Drawing development (cont.)

Last night I finished the second attempt at my drawing! – The new and improved version with the “time” element. I feel that when you look at this image you can get more of a feel about what it is relating to rather than the version with just the bottle. it works better as an overall design for the book as it gives away more of what the story could be about.

I think I shall develop this a little bit by importing it into Photoshop and adding different colours. I think I shall also experiment with different media; watercolours, pencil crayons etc… I have also bid on an old 1950s edition of Time Machine that is falling apart specifically so I can tear the pages out and collage them into my design (That’s if I win it!). I want to experiment a little bit more!

The Time Machine: Drawing Development

“That’s very macabre but very good!” – Mum, 21/11/2019

I worked some more on the development of my final idea, I had another go sketching out what I would like on my final cover to see how it would work! When I have completed the drawing it is my plan to copy it several times and experiment with different looks and techniques (I want to try the tea staining and watercolour again)

I feel that even in one night since I drew the first rough drawing that I have improved massively! I kept quite light on the shading with this one so far and it does look much better. I also felt like I was trying to compare how good my drawing skills are with everyone else I was looking at online. Obviously I was looking at examples of ink drawn pieces and I felt myself trying to make mine look similar.. it was only when I stepped back and looked at a really good ink drawing I did back in October that I realised to myself that I am good at ink drawing but that I just have a different style! I shouldn’t try and sway away from this to be like everyone else because mine is just as good but in different ways!

It is nice to sit back and do some drawing though and improve my skills so I shall give it a few more attempts before hopefully I shall feel I can settle for one final one to take forward and be happy with!

The Time Machine: Design Development – experimental drawings

Last night when I got home from work I decided to sit down and have a go with some experimental drawing. I know what idea I want for my final cover and can visualise in my head how I wish it to look but I actually have to try and make that a reality!

I want a potion bottle with a skull sitting at the bottom of it and the flowers coming out of the skulls eye socket straight out the top of the vase. The water in the bottle I want to look murky and dirty as it represents the Morlochs underground. I decided to give it a go drawing a skull in ink and then go from there!..

I have Pinterest (link below!) so I decided to have a look at different skull drawings and try to copy one off there!

This is what I ended up with! The first one being the drawing at the beginning before I added shading etc.. I think I have made the skull too dark with the shading and on the final piece I shall make it a lot lighter. I like the tea staining that I added though, I like how it has ran with the ink and gives a very murky effect.. (I still feel though it could have ran some more!) I could even try this with different colours using watercolours instead of the tea staining.

Overall I am pleased with my first attempt.. I have not sat down and drawn for a while and when I do draw it is never anything as dark as this! 😀

I shall have a go at repeating the drawing with different ways and techniques until I am happy with what I have achieved!